June Haiku
June HaikuOur universe whirlsmore not stuff~ than stuff out there June bug orbits rose." I've got to do something-- even if it's wrong!" ~ For Shir Visit me @ All In A Pen
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It took a while a work out what the second line meant(it's not that clear), it may be better as -more "not" stuff~~ than stuff "out there" >> or in italics etc~ Neato concept Shir Matt...
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Thank you Matthew!! You were ever so right! Beside the words, the concept takes a bit of imagery on the readers part. The slant is better I think. (I forget I can do that sometimes). " I've got to do...
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Well, I guess the bug or bugs is/are part of the "not" stuff June bugs orbit rose. Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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...well,it depends on how fast you drive, and how big your windshield is. " I've got to do something-- even if it's wrong!" ~ For Shir Visit me @ All In A Pen
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june bug's orbit rosetoo fast too fast too darn fastbail out now pendingRG<just in case another version is needed >Fellowship of the Pen Need some exercise?..The Challenge Center
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